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« on: April 14, 2009, 05:14:00 am »
My goal is to create a beautiful, short writing which can explicitly describe this situation in detail while being as fantastical as possible, yet relating to emotions we here on Earth can feel.  I want it to be descriptive, emotional, relative, elegant and beautiful.  Copy/paste and then change a few words as you wish:


Imagine walking towards a beautiful meadow and coming over a rolling emerald hill you notice your girlfriend is strumming her harp beside a sapphire pond. Her blonde hair is flowing around in the warm breeze, with a braided golden halo atop her head keeping it all in place. You kneel down beside her and take out your ocarina, harmoniously uniting melodies. In the sheer magnificence of the moment, you then make passionate love under the azure sky in your natural, worldly Garden of Eden, fully complemented by simultaneously climaxing in the realm closest to heaven we as mortals can possibly experience.


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"I want to be defined by the things that I love. Not the things I'm afraid of, or the things that haunt me in the middle of the night.  I just think that, you are what you love."  Taylor Swift, Daylight.

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« Reply #1 on: April 14, 2009, 08:46:00 am »
Terrible...
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Soft-Hedwig

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« Reply #2 on: April 14, 2009, 10:45:00 am »
*throws up*
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Maygs

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« Reply #3 on: April 14, 2009, 10:53:00 am »
My thoughts are similar to the first two replies in this topic.
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Nolan-Baucom

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« Reply #4 on: April 14, 2009, 11:31:00 am »
U R Funny
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Matt-Cook1

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« Reply #5 on: April 14, 2009, 11:40:00 am »
I suddenly appreciate Robert Frost

Actually even before this I really rated his frost at midnight and lime tree. I was a pretty obnoxious 18 year old studying these at school, but now I'd love to sit down with someone and discuss these poems.
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« Reply #6 on: April 14, 2009, 03:34:00 pm »
If it's terrible then why the fuck don't you help me out.

Jesus Christ you guys suck.
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"I want to be defined by the things that I love. Not the things I'm afraid of, or the things that haunt me in the middle of the night.  I just think that, you are what you love."  Taylor Swift, Daylight.

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Nolan-Baucom

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« Reply #7 on: April 14, 2009, 04:22:00 pm »
I'm sorry. The thing is, you phrase everything a little to flowery. Not that description is bad, but you overdid it.
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« Reply #8 on: April 14, 2009, 04:23:00 pm »
I want it overdone even more.
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« Reply #9 on: April 14, 2009, 04:35:00 pm »
my gf doesnt have blonde hair
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« Reply #10 on: April 14, 2009, 08:34:00 pm »
A rolling emerald hill hiding a sapphire pond? Was there a ruby there too and maybe a Forest Medallion?
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nothin' moves me more than a groove that soothes me
nothin' soothes me more than a groove that boosts me
nothin' boosts me more, or suits me beautifully
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« Reply #11 on: April 14, 2009, 08:58:00 pm »
thats inside the Great Deku Tree... I think its a 42 yards past the sapphire pond.
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« Reply #12 on: April 15, 2009, 02:40:00 am »
OMDL!!! Goose your lolstory was Thiradellwnd!
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« Reply #13 on: April 15, 2009, 10:51:00 am »
Brunettes for the win
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« Reply #14 on: April 17, 2009, 04:32:00 am »
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RWhiteGoose wrote:  
 

Imagine walking towards a beautiful meadow and coming over a rolling emerald hill you notice your girlfriend is strumming her harp beside a sapphire pond.   Her blonde hair is flowing around in the warm breeze, with a braided golden halo atop her head keeping it all in place. You kneel down beside her and take   out your ocarina, harmoniously uniting melodies. In the sheer magnificence of the moment, you then make passionate love under the azure sky in your natural,   worldly Garden of Eden, fully complemented by simultaneously climaxing in the realm closest to heaven we as mortals can possibly experience.

 
  when i read closest to heaven i thought of the goo goo dolls song, so ryan.... are you writing a late 90s alternative music song here? i bet you like savage   garden

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« Reply #15 on: April 17, 2009, 04:33:00 am »
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RWhiteGoose wrote:  
 

Imagine walking towards a beautiful meadow and coming over a rolling emerald hill you notice your girlfriend is strumming her harp beside a sapphire pond.   Her blonde hair is flowing around in the warm breeze, with a braided golden halo atop her head keeping it all in place. You kneel down beside her and take   out your ocarina, harmoniously uniting melodies. In the sheer magnificence of the moment, you then make passionate love under the azure sky in your natural,   worldly Garden of Eden, fully complemented by simultaneously climaxing in the realm closest to heaven we as mortals can possibly experience.

 
  when i read closest to heaven i thought of the goo goo dolls song, so ryan.... are you writing a late 90s alternative music song here? i bet you like savage   garden

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« Reply #16 on: April 17, 2009, 02:08:00 pm »
^so good, it had to be said twice!
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« Reply #17 on: April 17, 2009, 04:23:00 pm »
Since when does Miley Cyrus play the harp?
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« Reply #18 on: April 17, 2009, 04:39:00 pm »
that avatar is disgusting! GTFO!
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« Reply #19 on: April 18, 2009, 02:39:00 am »
taht ratava si !gnitsugsid !OFTG
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